Sometimes there are few people pinned to your life, whom you never wanna
see departing from that conjunction, you just wanna be an adhesion to them no
matter whatever it takes you to be with them. But then our destiny not always
conforms to our thoughts and desires. And sometimes those special ones do walk
away, leaving you in the darkness of cynicism…
" Don't Walk Away " |
In those subtle moments you
May be this poem would convey whatever you wanted to express in those moments but being at
I watch you walk away from me
and the tears start to fall
I ask myself a million times
How did we lose it all???
For the first time I had no words
that to you I could say
I cling to old memories
And I watch you walk away
I just don't want to let you go
But inside I know I must
My heart's whimpering with pain
But it's my mind I trust
There's confusion around me
There's numbness in my heart
But looking at you walk away
My world just fell apart
If only I could handle it
And bear to just say
I'd use my breath and say the words
"Don't Walk Away"
P.S - This blog post is dedicated to my dearest editor/friend/ khadus divyu .... Thnx dear for being with me.. I know sometimes am just too irritating but still whenever I asked you for your help I got you, standing with me... thnx for being the khaduest friend ever.. :)
35 Comments
Very gud......
ReplyDeleteDont walk away......
thnx dr :)
Deletei dont like it i luv it
ReplyDeletei was scred to read the fst part :P
DeletePouring your heart out in just one poem is certainly not an easy task...
ReplyDeleteBut, You have done it and that too in a profoundly amazing way....
:D :D *honrd* :)
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Deletesweet....and bitter... <3 it...
ReplyDelete@ahona thnqis my little frnd :)
DeleteWell done Mr. Abhi....Its too heart touching to be describable....u r really a versatile genius..... :) carry on dr...All the best for ur future writing....
ReplyDelete@osi ari soitan :(
Deletejah baaababbaaaaa..... :o comment, like korleo dos, na krleo dos....thn wht do u wnt Mr. Abhi....??? ok, then cmnt ta wthdrw kre nebo...???
Delete@osi dhore marbo ebar hunuman fst e koreni tai
Deleteuuuuuuuuuu, khomota ache amk mara.....??? U hunuman..!!! porbo then to comment korbo, time to lage....pora na hole ki kre korbo....???? :o most baje u....uff
Delete@osi ok ok jugruti gocha
Deletewow soooooooooo nice tar....its really heart touching......
ReplyDelete:D thnx rima :D
DeleteThis was actually written by me.. I just gave it to you to read and now see, its on your blog with all your credits. This is the real world! :P
ReplyDelete@gargi just gonna kill you now .. you just come to d college once n meet me
Deleteso swt of u abhi....thank u for the credit u gave me,even though i hav'nt contributed much.... :)
ReplyDeletethe poem is really pedantic about worthy feelings, although the greatest feeling expressed here is pain.
P.S: commendable work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@divyu without you i cant write :( i need u for editing :)
Deleteagn a gr8 piece f wrk..............lk it........
ReplyDelete@sudi thnx dr
Deleteagain and again ur creations wow me..keep up the good work..thumbs up..
ReplyDelete@anonymous pls mentn ur name
Deletevery nice! :)
ReplyDelete@priyanka thnx dr ..it meant a lot as it comes frm u :)
Deleteit is nyc..carry on abhishek..i love to read ur peotries..
ReplyDelete@shona thnx dr :)
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