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An Abandon Promise


A Small Promise



I promised myself that when it will be over,
i'd laugh at the memories.
but here i am without a smile in sight.

I promised myself that i would call you,
just to see if you were okay.
but here i am and i can't even dial your number.

I promised myself that when it was over,
i wouldn't shed a tear.
but here i am, shirt almost soaked.

I promised myself i would let you go gracefully.
but here i am, hating myself for letting you leave.


I promised myself that when it was over,
i wouldn't look back.
but here i am unable to walk forward.

I promised myself i would say goodbye.
but here i am, still saying i
you...

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65 Comments

  1. well done !! all i could say is "GREAT WORK" !!

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    1. @neha .. khuuuuuuuuuddddddddduuuuuuuuuusssssssssssssssss d grt :P

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  3. well done !! all i could say is "GREAT WORK" !!

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  4. awesomeeee.... reflects a very good talent of urs... :)

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  5. it felt like you have wrote this for some one special . who is she?

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  6. bahhhhh..sweet n nice...............

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  7. u just expressed my feelings..i cudn't hv found the words fr it..<3 it dude

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    1. @apu tor sathe thakar fol dkh dkh ki bje effct holo amr upar chi chi

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  9. what actually are u abhi???????????seriously man!!!!!!!!!!!!i hv got a real writer as one of my most wonderful frnd....excellent job dear...

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  10. hey its too nice......touched my heart....excellent job....keep it up dear...:)))

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  11. awesome lines.... really touching... its fantastic... :)))
    ---by ria

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  12. I like it....:) its fantastic...u r jst a awsm writer dear..:) carry on..!!!!

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  13. the poem is short but it really nice.... :)

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  14. hi, I happened to come across your blog on Soumani's wall and just wanted to say I liked your poem - it's simple, honest and very innocent.

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  15. the poem just echoes my story...it again brought tears after long time,,bhalotheko,u r a good human.

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    1. hi thnx but pls guys do put ur names while giving comnts

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    2. santanu Mukherjee from durgapur,,take care friend

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  16. i can relate to this!

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    1. thnxxx frnd but rly, it wud hv been grt if u cud tel me ur name

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  17. dude too much melo drma add a littile character and spice...

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    1. thnx for the advice why dont u suggest me 2-3 lines then?

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  18. nice poem creats nic impressn:-)

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  19. this poem is bestt.........
    awsssmmmm poem....

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  21. like it.... simple bt deep..!!

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  22. very nice with full emotions and heart touching good job Abhishek :)

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  23. its awesome..pretty cool...:)

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