I
promised myself that when it will be over,
i 'd laugh at the memories.
but here i am without a smile in sight.
I promised myself thati would call you,
just to see if you were okay.
but here i am and i
can't even dial your number.
I promised myself that when it was over,
i wouldn't shed a tear.
but here i am, shirt almost soaked.
I promised myselfi would let you go gracefully.
but here i am, hating myself for letting you leave.
I promised myself that when it was over,
i wouldn't look back.
but here i am unable to walk forward.
I promised myselfi would say goodbye.
but here i am, still saying i ♥ you...
I promised myself that
I promised myself that when it was over,
I promised myself
I promised myself that when it was over,
I promised myself
65 Comments
straight and simple....good....
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Deleteit felt like you have wrote this for some one special . who is she?
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Deletehi, I happened to come across your blog on Soumani's wall and just wanted to say I liked your poem - it's simple, honest and very innocent.
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Deletethnx bro :)
Deletei can relate to this!
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