A man
walked the road all alone,
Without
caring if summer,
rain or spring was gone;
Failures could not take his belief from him away,
He was strong enough to protect his dreams
So
that destiny had no role to play.
People started hating him,
as if he
was a criminal,
Some people felt his talent was phenomenal;
He did not care about criticism or the
complement ,
He was happy in his own world
Although he had no money
in his pocket
to pay his room’s rent.
Obstacles could not stop him
from moving forward,
Neither had he ever complained,
life to him was unfair or hard;
He never searched for someone’s hands
when he felt down,
He stood by his own
after he kissed the ground.
People never hit him with hands or
slapped hard,
But sometimes tears did appear in his eyes
listening harsh word;
”Why are you people scolding me?” he never asked,
Rather he chose the silence and kept
on moving forward.
His
aim was higher,
His dreams were brighter;
So how could have he reached there so fast,
Still
with dedication and belief he reached their at last.
He never stopped walking;
By seeing he reached where he intended;
Rather his dreams started to grow,
As if they were flexible to be called as “unlimited”.
He sacrificed
his share of happiness,
He had to go through his share of pain;
What helped him keep going was
The challenge he took to never die as a common man.
On his last day,
that man was sleeping
on his bed,
Counting his last few breaths,
Remembering those moments between
His birth and the upcoming death…;
Told last few words-It’s story of every man,
who never
lose his faith,
Remember, there is no point in closing your eyes,
If you will ever let your dreams to
fade .....
“ I walk this empty street ,
On the Boulevard of broken dreams,
Where the city sleeps…..
And I'm the only one…..
and I walk alone…. !!! “
On the Boulevard of broken dreams,
Where the city sleeps…..
And I'm the only one…..
21 Comments
nice thought............not 1ly nice,its vry nice(wht u hv wanted 2 say)..........bt writin style ta etar theke aagerta btr chilo.......... :P
ReplyDelete@sudipa I wrote it in 2 hour .. whereas I took 1 week to pen down my fst story n 2 nd story to 1 mahina ho gya has not even finished yet.
ReplyDeletenice work :)
ReplyDelete@dharanee noo dr i knw hv to work harder
Deletenice, take a look at my blog-http://shivesh-writerspoint.blogspot.in/
ReplyDelete@shivesh thnx bro i did visit you blog it was very interesting
Deletei think 99 percent of man here dies as common man. like said in 'A Wednesday'..."stupid common man".."traditional common man"..and those who think differently are jerks...
ReplyDeletesometimes, at some points of life the word faith has to be replaced by fate. right? other wise your man strong enough to protect his dreams shouldn't be walking alone on road.Those who overcome their fate with faith will taste victory in life.
last two lines are awesome...
@ vishnu thnx really
Delete"there is no point in closing your eyes,
If you will ever let your dreams to fade."
u knw may be its in form of a poem but all i ever wanna do is to convey a msg for our young gnrtn that we should not slip until we make our dreams come true . may be there will be times when you won't be able to get wht u dreamt of but then there is no harm in trying. At least you will know from the bottom of your heart you tried your best
people think they are jerks..i meant that..
ReplyDeletenot every one but yes most of them do
DeleteCould be better Abhi....the last one was superb.. :)
ReplyDelete@osi the last one was superb since it was a poem , a romantic one .. but its more of a statement rather thn being a conventional poem
Deleteu knw wht....u write poems like a ur writng a stry, nd thtz wht 'murders' it ! at sm places thr r efforts seen to maintain d rhyme badly........dun mind !
ReplyDelete@neha i didnt try to write a poem to be honest i was trying to make a statement.. it is not at all a typical poem
Deleteha superb ur ur poem makes me spellbound
ReplyDeleteu r poem make me spell bound
ReplyDelete@anyms thnx but do wrte ur name while posting the comnt
Deletewell said abhishek
ReplyDeletethnx
DeleteThanx yarr...hope u will be a Shakespeare in future. Ur writing skill is so nice.but try to use some ornaments....
ReplyDeletelols
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