She
looked out of the window of Techno India College , foiled by the audacity of
Rahul. It’s the 31th time that she called him since last night. But each of her
calls had gone unanswered.
Why the hell he is not picking up the calls? Why
does he carry the mobile if he had to put it in silent mode all the time? She
wrinkled her nose in annoyance n let a long sigh of frustration.
A Broken Angel |
Riya
has never really been those typical girl friends with be-my- puppy attitude towards Rahul, neither had she ever been
bothered about those girls roaming around her boyfriend. Few texts and couple
of calls are enough for her to call it a day as she believed in giving space in
her relationship.
But it’s been almost 30 long hours that Rahul had spoken to
her. Just before going to the prom-night party, Rahul called her for couple of minutes n that was the last time Riya heard his voice...
“Maybe he was drunken n then passed out in the
morning?? But then, Rahul never drinks or even interested in such activities.”
She wonders being immersed in her thoughts as she flaunted her phone
obliviously.
“Hey your phone is ringing … ” an affable voice echoed
from behind interrupting her ambiguous thoughts.
“Awehh …!! Its Pratik... Rahul’s bestie … ” she almost
screamed as she noticed the number on the screen.
“Heiii … what’s up Pratik?” riya asked as she tried to
gather her thoughts.
“Hmmm … can you please come to Apollo Nursing Home, ASAP? “
“WH... Why!!... Is everything alright? Please tell me
what happened?”
“Please come quick...” Pratik replied with a cold
voice.
“What’s the matter… tell me now!!” she shrieked with
frustration.
“Rahul met with an accident last night. A huge truck
had distorted his car brutally around 2am in the mid night on the Delhi high way ”
he retorted.
“ Nooooooo…… this can’t happen, maybe u both have
planned some pranks for me so that he can get an apology for kept me waiting
since last night, but let him know that this time I ain't gonna be trapped in
any of his tricks” she replied assumingly.
“This is not a prank for god sake, he…. he is no more”
he almost shouted out of aggravation.
The
penetration impact of that scream was so intense that it almost pierced her
consciousness and scattered her thoughts, soon the mobile slipped out of her
hands hitting the floor.
She
grew numb; she felt weak n made her way to sit on the floor. For her, the
moment seemed to pause, all the disturbances around her suddenly came to
seizure n the life has ceased to exit......
The
effect of that sound was sufficient, for others to notice her, as if she is okay. But
soon seeing her restless her friends accumulated around her, so as to know.
All
of them were suspicious, about the situation, but she was unable to revert with
a reply. But when finally her friends shake her to reality, she stood up
instantly unable to compose her.
The
class teacher Mr. Singha came after noticing so much gathering around her,
after all, she was the favorite to many teachers.
“What happened, Riya?” sir enquired.
“I... I gotta rush…….” This was all she was able to come up
with, at that point.
TO BE CONTINUED …… :)
“ Humse pucho kya hota
hai, pal pal bitana,
Bahut mushkil hota hai, dil ko samjana,
Yaar zindagi toh beet jayegi,
Bus mushkil hota hai kuch logo ko bhul pana… “
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