It pins down to let things go... Sometime it’s
like the harder you try to hold on to someone the more they hanker to go away.
In a Relationship, we
flow through a lot of Ups and Downs but that does not mean you will just let
those things agitate you and expecting all of it to be alright on one fine day!
It’s unfortunate but it’s the way truth is like, few relationships are just
like riding on an isolated wheel of lust leaving the soul of love far before
but the journey continues on that single wheel of lust and then comes the time
when the only thread which binds them together is Lust !!
So it is far better
to be shielded from such an artificial and derisive relationship and to be
alone………………………. all alone!!!
Had you ever been through such a blurred situation in life then definitely this poem has all that what it needs to touch your soul…
Is this all we have together?
Is this what love really is,
Yelling through a quarrel
And making up with a kiss?
Why can’t we get along?
Why do we have to fight?
We starve true love by day,
And feed lust all through the night.
I wish we’d settle down,
I wonder where peace went.
Why do we pick at each other?
Why can’t we be content?
It’s like tenderness has flown..
If this is what love is?
Then I’m pushing myself away more n more,
From this devoid love,
As now all I can make out of this is,
It’s better to be alone…………………..!!!
It’s better to be along , than being with someone who makes you feel
along …!!!
P.S : This blog post is dedicated to my dear friend " Sudipa Ghosh " who literally pushed me into writing...
Without you this would not be possible darling, it's a tribute to your honest friendship.....
P.S.S : You really don't need any fucking guys to make you happy, you are just awe-fucking-some in your own distinct ways.... :)
37 Comments
awesome really may be we don't need a guy to be happy all the time
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Deletereally very nice abhishek n grt lines to xpress.................
ReplyDeleteis it :O :P
Deleteyes bcoz it is dedicated so it is beautiful in its own way..
Deleten as always nice work...........................
where the dedication part :O i cant see it though @divu
Deleteits written there read it properly u will definately see it....... :)
DeleteThere's an old saying, "A woman without a man is like a fish without a bicycle."
ReplyDeleteYou have to think about that one!
@brian sir, yes agreed but there are some men or women they dont really belv in the concept of lov, relationship to them is just a game to be played... am trying to talk about those people though this poem
Deleteyaaaaaaaa....absolutely...............n wrilly gr8 wrk agn..........n mst f us hs gone through dis situation in our life i thnk............. n a gr8 thnx 2 u 4 dis writin................. thnk u re..............
ReplyDelete@sudu :O :O wht abt the dedication part :O
Deletehe,he,he............thnk u sir.........um glorified............ ;)
Deletenaaa re seriously thnk u dr..................
:P :P @sudu kheye de baba ebar
Deletea2 khai khai kiser ??????????? krte nei............ :P :X
Deletetor thekei to sekhlam re :P :P
Deletebt 1 thng s dat, love s nt a game 2 b played,its dat true love does not exist..........
ReplyDelete@sudu it does trust me on this one :) i meant it
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ReplyDeletewow grate work man but who is this girl
ReplyDeletequite true
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DeleteLovely......... Dear. Awesome Really nice ..........
ReplyDeletethnx dear
DeleteWell said .......
ReplyDelete@poulmi :(
Delete:P
ReplyDeletevery nice lines. A good flow of words and romantic too
ReplyDelete@himani didi thnxx meant a lot :)
Deletethumbs up
ReplyDeletehats off :)
i love this
@dhanu thnx dear :)
Deletetoooooooooo nice buddy////
ReplyDeletethnxx bro :)
Deletetoooooooooo nice buddy////
ReplyDeletesuperlike.. it goes with my life as well..
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thnx gargi :)
Deletevery well said and nice writing ...like it :)
ReplyDelete@osur :D
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