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Remembrance of Prodigies



Relationship or friendship is rarely destined to natural annihilation, instead most of the time they are assaulted by the Ego, Attitude and Ignorance.

Had it came to your notice that it’s really funny when we fall in love with the most unexpected person at the most unexpected time?

 I too had the same experience of being subjected to such unexpected individuals during the course of journey in my life. But then, had our paths n’t been crossed, I would not have been metamorphosed into a person, I believe, I am today.


Thank You for Those Moments Sweetheart
                                                                        
Sometimes I just wish, if I could exaggerate about what I feel for them…

So here’s a glimpse to all that I wanna explicit about all those prodigy individuals ……


You are too far,

than just away,

my eyes are getting wet.

Without you,

I wanna cry,
but tears are few…

Hey God, give me a chance,
to take care of her.....

I am upset today,
let me cry.

I have lost something,

let me lose everything….

My breaths are stopping,

let me stop them.


Every time i think of her,

I don’t know,
what to do,
how n when i said,
that i love you...


I had everything in my life,
but without her,
everything is incomplete...


It is my wish,
just come back

just come back…


Please come back.......!!!


-“ It’s hard to forget someone who gave you so much to remember… “
 

PS:  This blog post is dedicated to a mysterious “ BLUE ELEPHANT ” who, I believe, 

“ The best poet/writer  I have ever come across with …….!!!!




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49 Comments

  1. really heart touching...fantastic writing..carry on..!!! :) & best of luck for ur "......"

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  2. sometimes it just happens baby!
    but widout them ,or widout their guidance life hasnt achieved what we have today

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    1. @swpu totally agreed .. all of thm who came n gone made me wht i am today

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    1. u agn cl me a bachha
      and yr dead!

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    2. @swapu sorry bacha i forgt tht it feels ambrsin fr a "bacha" to be calld "bacha" infrnt of the entire world.. is nt it "bacha"? ohh fuck i guess i agn cald u "bacha" really sorry BACHA

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  4. hmmm wrilly nice..... lk it...............

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  5. fantastic.......just speechless.....
    ria de

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  6. nice.. good work... liked it

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  7. its too nyc...poetry is heart touching.....keep it up dear...god bless you..:)))

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    1. @sona thnx dear but to be honest u too shd continue wrting poems i hv seen two of ur poems thy were awesome

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  8. fantastic..... this is my heart wants to say someone plz come back still i m waiting 4 u.... love u lottttt....

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  9. nice poem, the feelings associated and the way opted in order to express !! great !
    keep it up !

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    1. @divyu hahahhaha really ? thank god u told me else how would i suppose to knw tht you loved it lols... thnx fr the edting yaar :P u r the best everrrrrr.......

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    2. see i commented to let u knw its nice!!
      welcum ji

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  10. good diction...touching feelings...keep the good work...

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  11. hi it's awesome

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  12. another good one....like it...ur lines are really heart touching.....:)

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    1. @dishre goru bollm je name ta mention korte :@ huh anyway thnkkkkkkkkkkkkk uuuuuuuuuuuuu dear

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  13. Nicely done! Good word choices and images.

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    1. @brian thnk u sir .. really nic to get a comnt from you but the choice of image was not mine .. my " khadus " friend neha chosen it for me :)

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  14. a young tender heart pining for lost love-a feeling that ennobles us ,teaches us to be strong and transforms us into a compassionate human being.Keep up the good work Abhi.

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    1. @paramita thnx u .. love the way of comtin though .. unique in its own genre :)

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  15. Ohh, the post is flooded with comments.. no place for the person whom it was actually dedicated to.. The Blue Elephant..@@
    Thanks Hippo .. aansu aa gaya!! Love you babes.. :)

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    1. @blue elephant :P :P tu to famous ho gyi re chal mje treat de now... 237 fb likes in two mere days woow khwa khawa :)

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    2. @ B.L forgt to add 589 page views in 2 days .... it will be unfair if u dnt giv me a proper tr8 :P

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  16. nice truly heart boggling,,, and u rightly said love is not some thing that u arrange like a droop of tear from cupid eyes it will stuck in ur finger for ever,,,,,,

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  17. really... " It's hard to forget someone who gave u so much to remember......"

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  18. REALLY VERY NICE.................AAAAWWWWWSSSSSMMMM
    @ABHI

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  19. Lovely writing, thanks for sharing! Keep going... :)

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